My worst Holiday

My worst holiday would be if I arrive at this fancy hotel 1-,there's no TV, the bath is broken and the bed is to soft for me.The food is to wired there is 2-caviar, soup of fish ball and bird eggs. I go to the pool and my dad trip and this hot guy fall to the pool .3-The guy is so hot, cool and nice.4-Then the guy goes to my room, the guy is in towel,the guy is beeding and dees. 5- I pick his he in my leg and told him why he comided suisaid, The police thuogth I could had killed him. 6- Then I remebred tha he gave me a letter but I didint open it, I gave it to the officer.7- My father ask me why I wasnt with the guy I told him he suesid, my father didnt bielived it.8- I said to my father"yes, He comited suesid". That would be terouble.
1-series of independent clauses
2-series of objects
3-series of modifiers
4-series of phrases
5-introductory prepositional phrase
6- introductory participial phrase
7-introductory adverb clause
8- introductory yes, no, or interjection